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    Can you roast my landing? (Ruthless, yet reasoned.)

    Posted by YesTechie on May 7, 2024 at 10:09 pm

    My business partner and I have experience in programming and IT in general. We built the website ourselves. For landing pages, we use service pages. I would appreciate your opinion from a PPC professional’s perspective.

    https://yestechie.com/services/wiring

    YesTechie replied 1 week, 3 days ago 2 Members · 1 Reply
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  • redditplayground

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    May 7, 2024 at 10:21 pm

    It’s very fast, like maybe the fastest website I’ve been on. I would make it a little easier to convert.

    Just put all the conversion actions on 1 page. Instead of clicking “Request service” then “agree and continue” Just put the form and phone number on the page.

  • Failbomber

    Guest
    May 8, 2024 at 11:58 am

    People might expect home at the top of the left menu. Might confuse them.
    Contact us at the bottom. Will be better at the top.
    Prefer a form in webpage tracking will be easier for you with a thank you page.
    You can click button tracking but if the computer don’t have an pc app for mails like outlook the customer can’t send emails after he clicks and will be blocked in this process this can create extra steps for customer.
    Icons are too big also the fonts are big for me you can fit 3 in a row will be easier people to find the contact us faster.
    Probably you need more text for SEO but that is my point of view. You can find different sources on how to create longer and meaningful text with GPT 4.

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