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Please roast my landing page
Hi,
Hope you are well.
I apologise in my failure to find and add the "CRO Request" flair.
I created a landing page for my Power BI one-to-one training service.
This is my very first attempt at a landing page. I don't have any testimonials yet but I have added my credentials at the bottom of the page.
https://learnpowerbi.carrd.co/
One other change I had in mind was to a add a 90 second video but that in itself is another skillset for me to be confident on camera.
I appreciate your help and feedback
Thanks,
SB
edit: The aim is to direct them to a 30 min call to see if I can help them and if so then offer them one-to-one calls.
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Right off the bat there is too much info above the fold without specificity, You need to have a clear CTA ideally a button that is the most prominent thing and value proposition you are offering.
So for example the action you want people to take, in this case a “free 30 min consult” should be a clear button and the reasons why you can help them should be the clearest and central message people see when they first land on your page.
You don’t want to force people to read a lot, keep landing page simple as possible. Have the information present for those that want it but always opt for simplicity.
Also don’t underline text unless it’s a hyperlink. which people have become accustomed to.
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made you this: [https://learnpowerbi.framer.website/](https://learnpowerbi.framer.website/)
lmk what you think
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seems like it would be difficult to accurately gauge people who want to go with your service. IMO its better to have a straight forward sales process that you can accurately see and modify to get the people you want. Maybe having a learn more part or a quiz to see if they would fit with your product. After it, show how it works. Then either sell it right there or offer a consultation.
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Generic icons, cheap free font, inconsistent padding throughout
Your copy is clunky
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Landing page design is heavily dependent on the traffic you’re sending to it.
What do your ads look like? Your ad copy and landing page work together. It’s hard to optimise one without the other.
I would also ask why you’re even running a website instead of using a platform like Fiverr?
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Here’s my roast:
1. How many times are you going to ask me to give you my email address?
2. You will call me and I can’t even call you? Hilarious. That’s enough for me to move to next website regardless how the rest of it looks.
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