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New site, please critique
Hi Team,
After some tips on here, I've built my site and would love any critiques/suggestions for what I should do in terms of optimising for conversions.
Cheers,
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Don’t use the word “Got” at the top
Get rid of the email pop up five seconds after a visit. No one is signing up for your email list before they can even assess your site, if ever. It’s annoying to visitors
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I’ve never seen an exit pop-up with no image before. Also, on your hero header. You need WAY better visual hierarchy. You can have a lower opacity white background and the same dark green shades as text or something. That’s quite an ugly combination you have right now to be honest. Black/White is generally the best contrast. So you can try a whitish low opacity background with a dark green text. Also, your template looks pretty bland. It’s 2024, I’m sure there are many templates that are much better that you can work with and build upon.
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Simplify the message on your homepage.
struggling to grow your business but got too many things to do?
Meet Talent Hyre
Hiring offshore staff to help you get it all done is what we do bestOverwhelmed Growing Your Business?
Meet Talent Hyre
The Experts In Offshore Staffing.# Get “A-Players” fast
You mention A-players here but then never reinforce that in the copy below, This a bold call, so back it up with confidence in this section “We only work with the best, so you do” “You’ll only work with the top 3% in their fields” or something to help put reinforce that your company space in the market is working with skilled workers.
# No lock-in contract (love this)
But then you go straight into a negative giving the notion that the customer might have a shit experience or a bad contractor. Don’t talk to this, “Enjoy no lock in contracts so you can grow your business when you need to and manage your slow season”
# Better staff – Half the price (feels like you’re talking about your competitors here)
I don’t mind this section but it’s too long and you can probably cut off the last half.
Lastly, the photos – They are a bit stocky. I get it, bootstrapping the project – but maybe you spend a few dollars on photos of remote workers in the PH..just some food for thought.
As an aussie marketer, it’s an attractive idea, I think a video testimonial from a B2B or D2C business would help talking about what their concerns were prior to engaging you, and how you worked around those concerns to now having a successful relationship with your platform
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For wordpress its about as good as you can do, but the chat in the bottom right was annoying in mobile
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