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landing page feedback
Hey everyone, I would love some critical feedback about my landing page. Any advice how to make it better? Thank you
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Disclaimer: I’m pretty new to the art of the Landing Page but this seems pretty solid to me. I might suggest making your contact info visible at all times. And perhaps add a background/border around the form?
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Is it wordpress, looking simple and functional. But I suggest you to use Whatsapp and call button as well.
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Fix your form on mobile. Looks weird. Put a background on it.
Build your page for mobile first.
The logo for ACE between the google rating and the form serves zero purpose. Move it the the top.
Make all of your buttons the same size, full width on mobile.
Change submit to “get instant price quote” or some other tangible outcome for the user. Submit is a weak cta.
Above the form, explain to user what happens when they fill out the form. Who will call? How long until they get help?
Move testimonials up to below the form.
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This page isn’t the worst I’ve seen. It’s not over-designed. But it’s not good. If one of my designers sent me this I would make them redo it.
Change our advantages section title to: Brands we service.
Move about us to the bottom of everything since users do not care to read stuff like that.
Hope that helps! Take another crack at this and you will do better.
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Speaking about mobile – this page doesn’t come off too trustworthy or legitimate to me. In order to fix someone’s appliances, they need to let you into their home. Nothing about this page makes me overly comfortable letting you into my home. More personalized photos, make your brand more apparent, more about pricing and availability, and how your team works. Who is your team? What’re their qualifications? What type of appliances to you repair? Why should someone choose you over the others? Your reviews are good but they’re mostly from last year and infrequent so I think there are some improvements to be made. Feel free to DM if you want more specific recs, always happy yo share feedback.
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Add different colors, the white makes it too plain. Add a menu, like contact us, and who you are. Its just to plain.
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Bland fonts, titles aren’t capitalized properly, bland colors, text too close to edges, nothing really eye catching here
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there are a lot of issues with this lander:
– no header graphic so the first impression is that it is unfinished
– the logo is no immediately obvious so it looks unbranded
– spacing and margin issues throughout on desktop and mobile
– the stock images, again, make the page look generic / unfinished
– your call-to-action buttons at the end are not clickable (phone number should be clickable for people on cell phones)if you need help with this, i have an amazing contact that does work for our PPC campaigns. dm me and i can pass you their info
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Don’t listen to the comments about plain colors.
Put the logo up top (should increase trust)
Change headline to “snohomish county repair” (too many wes w/ the subhead…minir thing though. )
For the form… change button to “request fast call back” … or “download 20% coupon”…Even better would be to have the form start with a question like “what kind of appliance do you need repaired” with radio choices that then conditionally reveal another question or 2 and the contact info..( this is a bit advanced but always drastically increases response when done right)
Overall it’s not bad…
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I get Lawnguru vibes, but not as polished. [https://lawnguru.co/](https://lawnguru.co/)
Try mimicking some sections they have that are applicable to you.
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The biggest issue I see is that there is a lot of whitespace and padding that you can reduce, thus requiring less scrolling for someone to see your information. Most people don’t even scroll past the inital fold.
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Everyone in this thread can talk to you about optimization all day long. And for good reason, it’s needed. But none of that matters if you don’t actually talk to the customer about what they care about… Their pain points. You need a professional video right at the top and you need to ditch the stock photos. Do a video / photo shoot with the company. Do it right. This page will get you nothing.
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ok guys probably I need somebody who can make landing page for me, does anyone know somebody who can do it
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