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Critique My Landing Page
This is a reference to a previous post: https://www.reddit.com/r/PPC/comments/1dn4ytb/critique_my_landing_page/
I am looking for feedback on a new version of that landing page: https://athletesportlight.com/
Would love any critiques or suggestions you may have to improve this! The actual product has not been produced yet so this is to gather interest in the product. Happy to answer questions!
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Hi! First thing I’m on mobile and the first number is cutting off my screen. So I’d suggest optimizing for mobile experience. Furthermore although it looks good landing pages should be different from your home page. This page is too long with a lot of information. A landing page should be quick to the point and get your message across. It’s a page where your potential customer will land and they will need to see the information they are looking for quickly without having to scroll endlessly. So I’d suggest:
– optimizing for mobile experience.
– creating a landing page different from your home page.
– make it concise and informational so they can get what they are looking for quickly.
Hope this helped 🙂
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